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magoon
May 14th, 2007, 08:18 PM
Chapter 14: The Website

Donald stared at his screen for hours. He had become somewhat addicted to his new spy toy, consequentially letting his grades slip and his tutoring gigs fall to the wayside. He rarely left his desk and never left his apartment. He kept his balcony doors permanently open to air out the funk that had collected over time from spoiled food and unwashed clothes. He did not want to miss a single live moment of Jodi in her room. He was on a 10-hour sprint since the last sighting, when Jodi had left her room with books in hand, probably to go study somewhere a little quieter than the dorm. To bide his time, Donald double-clicked the icon for an earlier recording he had made. A movie of Jodi studying in her Victoria’s Secret pajamas began playing. Donald silently cursed his inability to move, rotate, or zoom the webcam. Still, it didn’t really matter what Jodi did, as long as he got to see her do it.

Donald nearly jumped out of his seat as Jodi finally walked into her room. He accidentally knocked his wireless mouse off the desk trying to close the movie he was watching, truly the consummate klutz. After retrieving the mouse from the floor, he was saddened to see that Jodi was once again missing, but her door was open, so there was a good chance she was coming right back. She did, wrapped in a white towel. She was evidently preparing a shower.

“Excellent work,” said Paul from behind Donald. He leaned in to get a better look at the screen. “You were really thinking on your feet.”

“Well, yeah!” retorted Donald as if insulted.

“Calm down,” said Paul. “Now, I’ll pay you $500 a day to stream this from my computer at home.”

“The deal was 1,000!” exclaimed Donald.

“The deal changed,” replied Paul calmly. “This image isn’t very high-res and her connection is obviously not that great considering the way frames are dropping.”

“But if anyone finds out, I could get in serious trouble,” pleaded Donald.

“No one is going to find out,” assured Paul. “Besides, even if they do, my dad will take care of it.”

Donald reluctantly scribbled down the IP address and port of his streaming server on a sticky note, ripped it off the pad, and handed it to Paul. “I’ll replicate the stream. I won’t give you her address. This is my server’s IP and port. That’s all you get, and I’m going to be monitoring your usage. This is for your eyes only.”

Paul snatched the sticky note. “Totally,” he said with a smile. He walked toward the front door. He paused and turned toward Donald once more. “Ya know,” he began, “you’ve been pretty useful.” An eerie silence descended on the room as Paul stood and stared at Donald with nary a blink. “But.” Paul rushed at Donald and pulled him up from his chair by the collar. “I make the rules! Not you!” With that Paul dragged the completely stunned Donald across the room through the open doors to the balcony. Paul stopped short, but Donald stumbled headfirst over the rail, six stories to the parking lot below. Paul winced a little as Donald’s limp body crashed into the asphalt, making a somewhat satisfying crunching sound. He then ceremoniously wiped his hands of the whole ordeal and returned to Donald’s desk.

Paul pulled a letter out of his jacket pocket and placed it on the desk. It was his “suicide” note for Donald, typed and printed so as not to leave a handwriting trail. With a few quick keystrokes he broadcasted Jodi’s unwitting show to his buyers, a short but lucrative list of businessmen with a taste for reality TV. He then left the apartment.

Paul drove away in his Land Rover while simultaneously booting up his wireless laptop. He opened his “Jodicam” site and waited for her to return from her shower. She eventually did, once again wrapped in her white towel, closing the door behind her. Paul called her on his Bluetooth headset.

Jodi was putting her long wet hair up in a second towel when her cell phone rang. She recognized the number and didn’t want to answer. Paul pissed her off so much but fucked her so well. She hated herself for wanting to talk to him again. She answered the phone. “What do you want?”

“Want to make some more money?” asked Paul plainly.

“No fucking way. I’m not your whore. That was a really shitty thing to do!” shouted Jodi, not sure if she really meant it.

“I can pay you $1,000 a day,” said Paul, still driving.

Jodi was baffled. She paused before saying, “I can only imagine what I’d have to do for that kind of cash, and in case you don’t know what that means, it means ‘No way.’”

“Think before you speak,” replied Paul. “All you really have to do is keep your dorm life a bit more…interesting let’s say.”

“What the hell does that mean?” questioned Jodi.

“It means that you can star in your own reality show from the comfort of your tiny little room. In fact, you already are,” said Paul.

Jodi wrinkled her face in confusion and anger. “What are you talking about?”

“Your webcam is being broadcast to a number of very rich businessmen. They can see you right now,” explained Paul. Jodi spun around and stared at the camera. “All you have to do is get them off. It really should be very easy for you, a quick way to make a lot of money, and it doesn’t even seem like anyone is there.”

“You’re lying,” said Jodi.

“Does it matter?” asked Paul. “I’m heading to your place right now with your first payment. I’m going to hang up the phone now. If you accept my offer, drop the towels.” Paul ended the call and tossed his phone into the seat beside him.

Jodi stood aghast, still eying the little webcam atop her monitor. She wasn’t a computer expert by any stretch of the imagination, so there was no way for her to know if what Paul was saying was true. For all she knew, he was just trying to control her again. She stood blankly staring, as if one of her four walls had just been torn down. Then, slowly, she let down her hair, dropping the towel to the floor. The second one fell shortly thereafter. She was naked in the privacy of her room but at the same time on the global stage of the Internet. There was a knock at her door. She opened it a tad.

“Your roommate let me in,” said Paul. “May I come in your room, please?” Jodi hid herself behind the door as she opened it just wide enough for Paul to squeak through. “Thank you. Let’s begin, shall we?” Once more Jodi found herself in a position of lust and hate. Paul had a way of making her skin tingle even without touching her. “Get on all fours on your bed please, facing away from the camera.” Jodi silently obeyed. “Excellent. Now reach between your legs and finger yourself.” Jodi sucked two fingers until they were nice and soaked before lowering them to her excited cunt. She tickled her clit a little to get the juices flowing before plunging her fingers inside. “Very nice,” said Paul. “Now suck my fingers,” he directed as he put his hand in her face. Jodi complied. Paul then removed his fingers and approached Jodi’s ass. “Now be very quiet,” he said as he shoved his index finger into Jodi’s tight asshole. Jodi whimpered a bit. Paul responded by spanking her ass with his free hand. “I said be quiet.” Paul began moving his finger in and out of Jodi’s asshole while she masturbated. This was definitely something Jodi had never experienced. Mark had always wanted to try butt sex, but Jodi always shied away. Now, here she was with this strange guy that had this strange power over her, getting her asshole probed.

A second finger entered Jodi’s asshole. She managed to keep quiet. “Very good,” commended Paul. At this point Jodi was about to cum. Her back arched and her head fell as she vigorously rubbed and prodded herself. Paul pulled her hair. “Head up!” he demanded. Jodi came violently. Being completely at Paul’s mercy was more than she could bear. Her hard body rocked as she exhaled deeply and repeatedly, fatigued from the mere minutes of sexual activity. The orgasm caused her to sweat. Paul tossed a $100 bill at her. “You get a max of 10 of those each day. How many more do you want to earn tonight?” asked Paul.

Jodi rose quickly and pushed Paul onto the bed. She tore his belt and pants away, eager to feel his cock inside her. Like a heroine addict finally getting a fix, Jodi whimpered at the pleasure of slowly sliding Paul’s cock into her soaking wet pussy. “How much is this worth?” she asked as she increased her pace up and down Paul’s shaft.

"A regular fuck is worth $200,” said Paul, trying not show any signs of pleasure.

Jodi bounced a few more times before dismounting, not satisfied with fucking Paul for just $200. She faced away from Paul, standing at a slight crouch. She reached back and put Paul’s cock into her ass, her face cringing in pain and pleasure as it grew harder deep inside. “How about this?” she asked as she began to grind her hips.

“Definitely worth 600 bucks now,” said Paul, trying to save some cash for at least one more round. He stood up to get a better angle as Jodi leaned over a little further. Her tits bounced back and forth as Paul pounded her ass. She was so tight; it didn’t take long for Paul to cum deep inside her. Jodi fingered herself from the front to achieve her orgasm simultaneously. Paul pulled his softening dick out of Jodi’s ass, cum dripping from it onto the floor. “Very fucking nice,” said Paul. “We can stop for the night.”

“Fuck that,” said Jodi. “Tell me how to make the last 300.”

lawone
May 15th, 2007, 09:04 AM
Amazing story. What an imagination.

charmedxximsure
May 15th, 2007, 08:10 PM
your amazing!
please keep writing and update faster
you are awesome

chef_tom
May 17th, 2007, 03:21 PM
quality shit!

Goku472
May 19th, 2007, 03:06 AM
First of all, let me say I love your work so far. I've read all 14 chapters and you have a knack for storytelling and eroticism.

I'm drunk right now so here goes... Paul gives Jodi 100 to start off and says she gets a max of 1000. We're down to 900. 200 more for the fuck. We're down to 700. 600 more for the anal. We're down to 100. Then at the end, Jodi demands to know what she needs to do for the last 300. That's a 1200 total.

I love your work, but this has been on my nerves since I read it the first time. Either Jodi sucks at math or there's a typo somewhere. Like the post title says, I apologize for even bringing it up. If I weren't drunk right now, I'd still be ignoring it.

Keep up the great storytelling, man. I check the forum every day hoping for another of your chapters. You should be published and I mean that.

pornstar003
May 19th, 2007, 04:28 AM
I actually got frustrated by the math when I read it too, I still can't figure it out. Was gonna post something but decided against it. But since you brought it up, yeah, doesn't make sense.

magoon
May 19th, 2007, 11:21 AM
The intent was that Jodi started fucking him, and when she found out a fuck was only worth $200, she switched to anal to see how much more it was worth. So the $200 was changed to $600. So she got $600 for the anal instead of $200 for the regular fuck. Sorry about that.

pornstar003
May 19th, 2007, 05:41 PM
The intent was that Jodi started fucking him, and when she found out a fuck was only worth $200, she switched to anal to see how much more it was worth. So the $200 was changed to $600. So she got $600 for the anal instead of $200 for the regular fuck. Sorry about that.
Haha k, no worries. Chapter 15 please! :)

lawone
May 21st, 2007, 08:27 AM
you have to be kidding - Jodi is involved in a hot sexy steamy adventure, screwing a guy she dispises for money, in a long line of sexual adventures, and you guys put a pencil to the math? wow, I need to be more observant to the little details I guess, but who cares? This set of stories is hot.

pornstar003
May 21st, 2007, 04:08 PM
you have to be kidding - Jodi is involved in a hot sexy steamy adventure, screwing a guy she dispises for money, in a long line of sexual adventures, and you guys put a pencil to the math? wow, I need to be more observant to the little details I guess, but who cares? This set of stories is hot.
Who is Jodi?

I love these stories, I wasn't complaining, just shows I'm paying attention to the story more than you :P

magoon
May 21st, 2007, 05:36 PM
you have to be kidding - Jodi is involved in a hot sexy steamy adventure, screwing a guy she dispises for money, in a long line of sexual adventures, and you guys put a pencil to the math? wow, I need to be more observant to the little details I guess, but who cares? This set of stories is hot.

Haha. I can't blame them. Nothing kills a hard-on like bad math. How about this though...the next chapter will just have Jodi doing a lot of addition with a little bit of bad sex. ;)

pornstar003
May 21st, 2007, 05:49 PM
Haha. I can't blame them. Nothing kills a hard-on like bad math. How about this though...the next chapter will just have Jodi doing a lot of addition with a little bit of bad sex. ;)
Whatever it is, get it up as fast as you can (I mean the story...)

Great writing though, props!

lawone
May 22nd, 2007, 05:15 PM
Who is Jodi?

I love these stories, I wasn't complaining, just shows I'm paying attention to the story more than you :P

Indeed it does :rolleyes:

lawone
May 22nd, 2007, 05:16 PM
Haha. I can't blame them. Nothing kills a hard-on like bad math. How about this though...the next chapter will just have Jodi doing a lot of addition with a little bit of bad sex. ;)

math and sex - some people are gonna go nuts over that - but I won't be getting my calculator out, I can assure you.

Goku472
May 26th, 2007, 04:33 AM
Looking back, I'm even more sorry I didn't notice it. I love your storytelling and I look forward to more.
Goku

fearny524
May 29th, 2007, 12:23 PM
The math be damned, what a story! Keep it up mate!

pornstar003
May 29th, 2007, 09:05 PM
Can't wait for Chapter 15

flysky
May 30th, 2007, 12:20 AM
Great story like always. Your imagination and writing is beyond words. You are a great writer.

lawone
May 30th, 2007, 08:53 AM
Great story like always. Your imagination and writing is beyond words. You are a great writer.

I have to agree with that magoon

charmedxximsure
May 30th, 2007, 11:02 AM
pleeeease update soon, i check everyday for updates...

pornstar003
June 3rd, 2007, 12:12 AM
Damn, it's been a while.

mdisgood
June 3rd, 2007, 11:06 PM
i wonder if she can't find the forum. on my pc pichunter.com is how i get here and it was slightly reformatted so you have to go a round about way to find it on the site. just a thought

flysky
June 8th, 2007, 12:09 AM
It's been a while since your last post. Just wanted to check if you posted a new chapter. You have many fans waiting for you right now. I think you are becoming a star with pichunter.

Goku472
June 14th, 2007, 12:49 AM
I rarely post because I rarely have anything good to say(so I don't say anything). Please continue the story for us because I'm sure I'm not the only one checking back here daily hoping to see the next chapter. If anyone else agrees with me, post a "/bump" if nothing else. Keep this story on the front page where it belongs.
:bow: @ Magoon

flysky
June 14th, 2007, 04:44 PM
I have to agree with that. I check this website everyday for your story.

pornstar003
June 14th, 2007, 05:18 PM
I check daily, heh.

lawone
June 19th, 2007, 01:27 PM
magoon, where are you?

flysky
June 26th, 2007, 12:13 PM
Just checking if you posted something new. I am not the only one waiting for the new chapter. Lets not give up now.

triple78
June 27th, 2007, 11:50 PM
i don't think we will ever know how it all ends

lawone
June 28th, 2007, 04:21 PM
i don't think we will ever know how it all ends

say it ain't so!

locutus
July 9th, 2007, 06:09 PM
fantastic story, amazing work

chef_tom
July 11th, 2007, 07:25 PM
please post more!!

Goku472
July 24th, 2007, 04:04 AM
Post title says it all. I still check this thread every day just hoping for chapter 15. I <3 Magoon's storytelling.

High_Times
July 25th, 2007, 12:37 AM
I actually got frustrated by the math when I read it too, I still can't figure it out. Was gonna post something but decided against it. But since you brought it up, yeah, doesn't make sense.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU PI$$ED HIM OFF AND HE LEFT US!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I blame myself for not beind there.:huh:

happytoonz
July 26th, 2007, 04:16 AM
Ok....a lil shy to admit that my rabbit and I have been up all night reading..and I must say there is no way you can stop now .....Please give us more! YOU ARE SIMPLY AMAZING!

Thank you thank you thank you

KS
July 26th, 2007, 05:19 PM
a lil shy to admit that my rabbit and I have been up all night readingShy??? Damn lady show us, don't keep us imagining!!! :D

flysky
August 1st, 2007, 09:07 PM
It's been a while since your last post. I know your busy with your own personal life, but im sure everyone will be thrilled if you continue on with your stories. I don't think i'm the only one that still has hope that you might continue your story. In fact, I check everyday to see if you posted your stories. You have many fans that are waiting...lets not give up now.

magoon
August 15th, 2007, 07:40 PM
Sorry to have disappeared for so long, but I have been busy with some junk and some stuff. I really appreciate everyone's feedback. I promise I'll write some more. How could I not when the demand is so high? Thanks for the continued encouragement, everyone.

flysky
August 16th, 2007, 04:03 AM
Thats great to hear. Hopefully it'll be soon though.

charmedxximsure
August 16th, 2007, 08:29 AM
omg, it's so fabulous to hear you're back! im so glad you're going to keep writing...please do so soon!

lawone
August 16th, 2007, 06:01 PM
damn encouraging to hear you will return with anothe story (or another chapter) magoon, but it is always nice to have a friend return here

magoon
August 16th, 2007, 10:13 PM
Chapter 15 is up: http://forum.pichunter.com/showthread.php?t=31350